Sunday, November 11, 2007

fip [2] haiku

one crumpled receipt
eight-teen dollars for fish food
when did i get fish?




by Amen

7 comments:

Yaya said...

Haikus are great!

yaya
chunkliketuna.blogspot.com

Legacy said...

LoL

Autumn Leaf said...

you made me want check my pockets more often lol

Henpenney said...

You are a genius. Really.

dimmi said...

Eighteen dollars worth of fish food?

Holy mackerel. Those are some hungry fish.

Pete said...

A forgotten five,
two quarters, a dime,
and a ticket stub.

Love the blog!
Thought I'd add a haiku of my own-

Brandi said...

Pete,

Sorry, but you need two more syllables in your second line. 5-7-5